7 Comments
User's avatar
Jeanne Huff's avatar

Oh man that last stanza stabs my heart. I also like your parenthetical lols — like an embarrassed little laugh.

Expand full comment
Chad Andrew Dryden's avatar

Thank you! There’s a postscript note about the lols I’ll message to you.

Expand full comment
Erica Sparlin Dryden's avatar

We are all secrets aren’t we?

Expand full comment
R William Parmenter's avatar

“a discount wannabe L. Cohen replicant” love it!

Expand full comment
Chad Andrew Dryden's avatar

Thank you!

Expand full comment
Mary Sirgo's avatar

I like to imagine the “I” and “you” reside within the same being.

Expand full comment
Chad Andrew Dryden's avatar

I like that!

Expand full comment